DaddySatyr
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Joined: 8/29/2011 From: Pittston, Pennsyltucky Status: offline
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ORIGINAL: MasterCaneman Now THAT is a flounce. Have to take away some points because you actually know how to spell things like "cancelled" and "civilized". Perhaps a touch more "ghetto" or "text" speak would raise the score. Big ups for colored text/all caps, you conveyed the baseless angst of a frustrated and entitled suburban idiot who can't figure out why he isn't meeting women because he's a 24/7 cellar dweller. Good job! 7/10 I don't know if this will hurt or help my score but I was actually going for Findomme. As for the spelling, I wanted it to start off well and degrade down to txt speak to show that the anger was building up and the person couldn't be arsed (by the end) to bother with spelling (or passive-aggressive hostility). Peace and comfort, Michael
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A Stone in My Shoe Screen captures (and pissing on shadows) still RULE! Ya feel me? "For that which I love, I will do horrible things"
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