MasterCaneman -> RE: Technical Question: Handcuffs+Radiator (2/15/2014 9:13:27 PM)
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Hmmm, some possible answers already. Aries, in order to conduct the experiment properly, I'd need a radiator to do it as I wrote it up. Hot plate isn't close enough, and to be honest, I'm not all that keen on trying myself. Hlen, windchymes, it would be nice, but the whole scene revolves around a fast, poorly-planned abduction, and the antagonists I've written aren't ones to think ahead like that. Their incompetence in this area is one of the salient points later on in the story. To lay it out more without cutting and pasting, the heroine was the subject of a botched kidnapping, and while her captors have planned ahead enough for handcuffs, they weren't thinking much past that. She is fully-dressed, and cuffed to the radiator only because their intended hiding place was co-opted, and they had to think fast. I'm trying to impart a sense of fear, desperation, and to describe the sensations of what handcuffs fastened to a working radiator feels like to the reader. While one of the kidnappers is trying to keep his mom out of his bedroom (not minors, just two guys who failed to launch), she's in there trying to keep from getting burned as the cuffs are growing warmer. I just need some descriptive language that is based on if anyone really experienced something like that. Granted, it's a minor point in the whole story, but I'm trying to make it sound as 'real' as possible.
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