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A Slaves View - 5/21/2014 11:56:02 PM

ecstasys

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on my knees i gain new prespective
i achieved a sense of me
on my knessa head held high
eyes gazeing downwards
is where i chose to be.

Sitting straight i feel His Presence
His Shadow shields me from Harm
leaning close with head upon His
chest i hear His Heartbeat
under His Gaze i begin to yield
this is where i chose to be.

His wishes are my purpose
His Commands I obey
His Voice drowns the world
out around me
at His Feet is where i wish
to stay Forever.

~ecstasys~ written 7/8/99

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RE: A Slaves View - 5/22/2014 1:21:14 AM

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this is only person view & poem from the heart ,

< Message edited by ecstasys -- 5/22/2014 1:23:14 AM >

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RE: A Slaves View - 5/22/2014 1:25:27 AM

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It is lovely.

Only nit pick, is that "gazeing" should be "gazing"

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