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my Bathroom - 12/13/2004 9:53:09 AM

Barbara

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My bathroom... Where I can be alone. To urinate, defecate, think, read, write, masturbate and bathe. Locking the door I leave my other world behind me-if just for a short while. I am free. Sometimes I cry...but aaah, the cries are welcomed and embraced. Broken sobs as my mind comprehends its conquered state. Twenty Seven years in this state. I am certain this is a gift and I am blessed. Revealing itself in the natural surrender of my mind and body. To be squatting, on all fours-in humility, full of reverence, awe and instinct. Alone by myself, yet still on display for you, desperate to please, to show yielding - not to appease, but because in casting aside all pride I am consumed by an id so pure and humbling- I may not have dared to expose it willfully without you. You have allowed me to be ME.

Respectfully,
Barbara

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RE: my Bathroom - 12/13/2004 3:57:26 PM

alwayzron

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Barbara ..... excellent !!! You have a creative mind and an imaginative style of writing ~~ a rare trait. If I might suggest ... and I don't say this to sound negative .... work on your grammar and you may be able to write for a living (although it's a tough living).

((( A creative writing professor told me once, 'anyone can edit ... it takes creativity to write.' )))

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RE: my Bathroom - 12/13/2004 5:34:33 PM

theroebabe

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Interesting how i see it as the opening of ones self to another. hmmm thanks for sharing.

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RE: my Bathroom - 12/14/2004 9:06:28 AM

FangsNfeet

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no kidding. Takes me back when I was growing up. Also reminds me of my college days. Thank God I have my own place now. I live alone. But yeah the bathroom is a nice place indeed to take care of allmost all your needs