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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/20/2007 7:40:06 PM

mp072004

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I'd like to challenge your statement that you are perfect in English. I am sure that you have worked very hard at your written English, but it's still not perfect. You will want to work on your grammar, syntax, capitalization, and punctuation. You should also avoid slang like "u" for "you" and "wanna" for "want to." Those patterns of written language are bad habits of many native speakers, but I find them unattractive, and judging from above replies, so do other women. Since you are still thinking about how to develop your English, it will be easy for you to drop those nasty habits before they become ingrained.

In general, try for a more formal, less colloquial tone, and use short, declarative sentences. When I am reading the writing of those who are still improving their English, I am sympathetic to a correctly structured, clear, simple message that lacks elegance. It is easier to understand messages like that than to understand those that use slang and long sentences, and so it is easier to forgive errors in the language. For example, you might write: "Good morning. I am a submissive man. I live in Egypt. I would like a cyber relationship. Would you like to talk more?"

Monica

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/21/2007 2:25:05 AM

Footslaveegypt

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Dude, i talk about i know about english but not perfect perfect i mean i can under stand what a Mistress Want so i obey Her. ! i hop u under stand Me.

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/21/2007 2:40:56 AM

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quote:

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Dude, i talk about i know about english but not perfect perfect i mean i can under stand what a Mistress Want so i obey Her. ! i hop u under stand Me.

WHOA!!!! Never call a Domme "Dude"

By the way, the correct formation of that garbled message should be:

"Ma'am, I said, I know about English, but I do not speak it perfectly. I mean I can understand what a Mistress wants, so I can obey Her wishes! I hope you understand me."

(I think)
Milady Angelique

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/21/2007 2:42:35 AM

Footslaveegypt

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mp072004 << not a Domme

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/21/2007 3:13:43 AM

BeachMystress

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I'm with LadyEllen on this. While I find it irritating to get mail from out of state and over seas (I have a big red LOCAL only, NO RELOCATION'S, NO TRAVELERS at the top of my profile) I find it doubly irritating to be written by men from country with a history of mistreating women. They have to look abroad for Dominant Women because their very society keeps women from daring to show Dominance, lest she be ostracised at best and harmed at worst. It is easier to try to use a foreign woman than to work towards societal change in their own culture.

And I often have to wonder if they'd welcome that change in any case. After talking to a bunch of men from those countries, both online and in person, over the course of five years, I'm left with the feeling that they see Dominant Women as still being inferior when it comes down to it. They do not believe in their hearts that women are worthy of respect as the head of the household. Submission is role play to the majority of those men. They still feel they can order the woman around. Look at the attitude of the OP. The woman is to come to him. He can't be bothered renewing HIS passport.. let the woman do the work. Let her spend her hard earned money to give him his kink. And then they wonder why they don't have women falling all over them. *shakes head* Fix your own culture and find your Domme there!

Just my two cents.. *puts away soap box*

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/21/2007 3:32:00 AM

TheDiva

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quote:

ORIGINAL: Footslaveegypt

mp072004 << not a Domme

mp072004 <<not a Dude.

The post was signed "Monica"! Can you hear the clue bus coming? Monica is a traditionally female name.

Being rude is not charming. Being defensive is not appealing. Oh, and stop whining. Learn to accept the constructive criticism of people who are being kind enough to try to help you out.

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/21/2007 6:31:52 AM

LaMistressa

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Hi Footslaveegypt: a lot of us here are looking for local submissives to meet. I have a hard enough time meeting people from Baltimore and New York, let alone Cairo. I think your English is pretty good (I'd be curious to know what your TOEFL score is - did you study in the States or UK?), but you need to be specific in that you can only serve via online, and then work on building trust and a relationship (possibly leading to travel) from there. And be sure to read profiles thoroughly before writing to them - if you were to write me, I'd know that you weren't very good at following directions, as I have it in my profile that I only am interested in R/T and local people.

Best of luck in your search.

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/21/2007 7:38:47 AM

Footslaveegypt

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am Sorry i really dont know :S that Sorry Monica Ma'am

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/21/2007 8:12:59 AM

lily84

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Hi egyptian boy,
Im not sure if they ignored you bs of your nationality but i dont think its the reason.
Everyday,i have got many msgs from sub/slaves but i can not reply all of them.So i need to work it out which one sounds impressive to me.Normally i prefer humble ones than those who only talk good about themself.
Well,boy are you sure that you did good impression to them?
Miss L

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/21/2007 9:43:18 AM

Footslaveegypt

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yes Ms Lily am sure

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/21/2007 12:37:23 PM

SweetDommes

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I'm still waiting for you to answer my question: what is it that you have to offer a Domme by serving her online only?

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/24/2007 8:26:41 AM

Footslaveegypt

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Sweet Domme, i offer my self for u What Ms want me to do i will do anything for You

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/24/2007 8:34:00 AM

LadyeSaige

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This is the type of vague answer that so many boys with no experience spit out...but it really doesn't have any meaning.

If you're wanting to perform on cam for a Domme, why don't you have pictures of yourself on your profile? If you're good-looking enough, you might get a taker or two.

< Message edited by LadyeSaige -- 4/24/2007 8:37:20 AM >

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/24/2007 9:29:32 AM

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quote:

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Sweet Domme, i offer my self for u What Ms want me to do i will do anything for You

You totally missed my point. You have absolutely nothing to offer that can't be gotten from 100s of other places (including ones where we don't have to actually talk to anyone, just go and click a few links for pictures/videos). You can't come clean our house, you can't come give us backrubs, you can't come take the dogs out for a walk, or anything else that would be something of value to us.

I'm with Beach on this one - you need to work on your own society and find yourself a Dominant there, because the chances of you finding someone online who is willing to take what you offer without charging you for it are slim.

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/24/2007 9:41:43 AM

Footslaveegypt

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it's hard in egypt to find a Domme

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/24/2007 9:45:02 AM

Footslaveegypt

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btw if i can find in egypt,i wont post the topic here

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/24/2007 2:27:53 PM

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Which is why we suggested working on your own society to make it more acceptable for women to be dominant.

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/24/2007 3:04:38 PM

Footslaveegypt

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what u Mean Ms

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/24/2007 3:33:11 PM

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I am not going to spell it out for you. If you can't figure out ANY ways to help make Female Dominants more accepted in your society, then you probably aren't smart enough to pull it off even if we tell you how.

Go back to working on your English and trying to figure out what you really have to offer someone.

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RE: Hmm Why? Serious am Sadly - 4/24/2007 3:59:24 PM

MistressRouge

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quote:

ORIGINAL: Footslaveegypt

Why, Mistress Here When they know am Egyptian, They leave me,? Am Really 19 m Egypt, Know All BSDM Btw am Cute My Family Dont know That. But When I Talk to Mistress Etc etc They ignore Me .i wanna know the Reason ... and i Say them i have Web Cam and Mic,and am Good and perfect in English and i say also u can visit me in Egypt. u Welcome All So ...
I Wanna see real Replies

Come to the UK and worship My perfect feet sweetie.

I had a footslave travel all the way from Turkey, to worship & lick My beautiful feet all day long.

I sessioned with a lebanese sub today, I enjoy My international devotees lol.

http://mistressrouge.webeden.co.uk/

< Message edited by MistressRouge -- 4/24/2007 4:00:13 PM >

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