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RE: Profile critique/advice please. - 5/11/2007 2:28:41 AM

Copulo

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Only you can make that initial decision in what ‘YOU’ want
If this is play time then you need a Mistress that only wants play time too.
If you desire something a little deeper then you are going to have to work harder at your profile.
People may take a quick scan of your profile but certain words, feelings and desires will catch the eye of a Mistress that is seriously looking and then she will read on.

My ex husband, who I am still very good friends with, recently confided in me that he had put a profile up on another site. He complained that he was having no luck and asked if I would take a look. He’s and incredibly deep and interesting man and yet his profile made him look shallow and desperate. I re-wrote it for him and at first he was dubious about using my words. He felt that perhaps it was too much without getting to the point. I told him to give it a try, which he did and I’m pleased to say that he has now (hopefully) met the woman of his dreams.

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RE: Profile critique/advice please. - 5/11/2007 4:47:47 AM

joyinslavery

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Since you quoted me, please make yourself (and your point) clearer.

Edited to add:: Check out the little passive-aggressive smiley face I attached to the message!

< Message edited by joyinslavery -- 5/11/2007 5:21:37 AM >

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RE: Profile critique/advice please. - 5/11/2007 8:24:14 AM

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ORIGINAL: pixelslave

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ORIGINAL: joyinslavery

If you're going to be doing most of your searching online, my recommendation would be to put your energy into a well thought-out, personalized introductory letter.

Tossing a bone in your direction, how many different ways can a puppy say in a message "Woof, woof, please do me!"??

- pixel

Btw pixel, I've got a bone you can work anytime.

Edited to add: You ever make it to any events here in Dallas? If so let me know. I'm VERY anxious to meet you. Always wanted to meet a chivalrous (pompous) 'knight'. Pfffft.

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"...we must learn, each one of us, that the world was not made for us, and that, however beautiful may be the things we crave, Fate may nevertheless forbid them."
-Bertrand Russell

Mainstream...The New Alternative

*Beware of dog*

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RE: Profile critique/advice please. - 5/11/2007 10:35:23 PM

pixelslave

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quote:

ORIGINAL: joyinslavery

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ORIGINAL: pixelslave

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ORIGINAL: joyinslavery

If you're going to be doing most of your searching online, my recommendation would be to put your energy into a well thought-out, personalized introductory letter.

Tossing a bone in your direction, how many different ways can a puppy say in a message "Woof, woof, please do me!"??

- pixel

Btw pixel, I've got a bone you can work anytime.

Edited to add: You ever make it to any events here in Dallas? If so let me know. I'm VERY anxious to meet you. Always wanted to meet a chivalrous (pompous) 'knight'. Pfffft.

My sincerest apologies that you apparently didn't realize I was merely making a joke that played on the fact that you do have an avatar of a dog with a bone on it's nose. No disrespect was at all intended.

If you'd genuinely like to meet, write me on the other side. Perhaps we can arrange for an appropriate time & place to meet when Mistress is available as well.

- pixel

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