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Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:22:59 PM   
thickerdenwater


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Status: offline 		Just wanted some feed back on my profile. good, bad, and ugly. Thanks for the help.
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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:30:18 PM   
OmegaG


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Status: offline 		your user name gives me an Andy Gibb ear worm (not a bad thing, maybe?)

I think it's good.  Suggesting that someone would be discarded may be harsh, but I understoond the point you were trying to make.

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:41:08 PM   
Lumus


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Status: offline 		Omega's right, profile seems ok.  I might venture to add that if you're actively looking, you may wish to say more about yourself - the better to let others know if they share opinions with you, not just likes.

[My profile is somewhat vague, in and of itself, primarily because I have a girl and prefer one-on-one conversation.  It suits me.  If yours suits you, roll wit it.]



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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:42:34 PM   
SailingBum


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Status: offline 		You present yourself well.  Showing what your looking for and giving some information  about who you are.  Good Job.  I must admit I don't read many profiles.  My profile saying nothing about me thought I not looking either.

BadOne

< Message edited by SailingBum -- 2/25/2008 7:45:27 PM >

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:43:25 PM   
PrizedPosession


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And it looks good thickerdenwater

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:44:20 PM   
thickerdenwater


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Status: offline 		so far I seem to be doing well, ironically I might add. What information would you be talking about Lumus? Do you mean further describe the likes/dislikes?

well at least I have found out that Im not an egotistical idiot who thinks his profile is pretty good.


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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:46:23 PM   
MsIncontrol


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Status: offline 		I think your profile is decent also.  I would like to see more about you, outside your BDSM desires, since you say you are looking for more.  Also, for the first line to read d/d free...it tells me  you are looking for sex...first and foremost.  While I am sure it is important to you, I would think that this is something that can be further down the post unless you are strictly looking for sex.

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:47:59 PM   
GreedyTop


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Status: offline 		my suggestion would be to expand on your likes and dislikes... WHY do you like/dislike them? Otherwise, looks great :)

BTW..in the pic in front of the TV..that wasn't porn, was it??  *grins*


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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:48:16 PM   
breatheasone


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Status: offline 		Its ok....not much there about who YOU are...and the thing about discarding her....did you mean if she gains weight? just askin...

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:48:23 PM   
thickerdenwater


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Status: offline 		duely noted :D thanks. Sex is always important, but not chiefly important.

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:49:19 PM   
SailingBum


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quote:

ORIGINAL: thickerdenwater

so far I seem to be doing well, ironically I might add. What information would you be talking about Lumus? Do you mean further describe the likes/dislikes?

well at least I have found out that Im not an egotistical idiot who thinks his profile is pretty good.



There is quite a few of those running loose

BadOne

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:50:37 PM   
thickerdenwater


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Status: offline 		wieght has nothing to do with discarding "her". everyone is different, but I expect subs to take care of them selves. Part of that is the mental, and *most* women have a problem with them selves and just let it go so bad that they never recover. So if they are happy with themselves, and are healthy (within their reasonable control) then Im happy.

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:51:42 PM   
OmegaG


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Status: offline 		I read it (and I'm projecting) that he didn't have much use for a woman that would get her man and then forget how to brush her teeth and comb her hair.  Who wouldn't wear anything but stained sweats and who generally forgot she was pretty.

But I've dated guys who've let themselves go once they thought I wasn't going anywhere, and they never gained or lost an ounce.

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 7:58:40 PM   
thickerdenwater


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Status: offline 		actually thats a movie with the Jerry O'Connell from the show "sliders". I believe its called something like love hurts.

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 8:00:02 PM   
GreedyTop


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Status: offline 		*grin*  I was just teasin ;) 

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 8:10:26 PM   
thickerdenwater


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Status: offline 		lol, oh I know, but now its going to bug me cause the name of the movie isnt in the his credits, It *might* be "Buying the Cow" but Im not sure

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 9:24:17 PM   
chellekitty


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Status: offline 		well, here is my $1.50 on your profile...

it is a personals site...you're "advertising" yourself for lack of a better word, but you have not told people what the product really is below the surface...while i think that it is awesome that there are others that want to get to know potential signifigant others on a one-on-one basis, if there is something deeper, you have to let others get a glimpse of that deepness on your ad...here's what i thought while reading your profile "yes, you're listed as a Dom...well, wouldn't life be boring without passion...i would shoot myself if i got like that...alrighty then........yea, the picture shows that...do i look like boo-boo, yogi?"....nothing really thought provoking or question inspiring...though by your postings i can already guess that there is more there than that...

my suggestion? read a whole bunch of different male Dom profiles...see what sounds shallow, what sounds deep, what sounds asinine, what sounds like it was copied and pasted out of a book or how-to website, what sounds like it is honest and true...and then go from there...and write about you...real sometimes doesn't get massive responses but real gets a higher percentage of real responses...and thats what matters to me...

good luck
chelle


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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 9:46:15 PM   
RedMagic1


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Status: offline 		I think profiles are almost irrelevant.  Contact and interaction are fundamental.  Did you post this question because you have noticed a pattern of not meeting people -- or because you are dissatisfied with your results for some other reason?  Your current profile is way above average, so my guess is that you are "losing" the woman later on.  I've had good results meeting women online-to-real, and might be able to help if you narrowed down the problem.  You could drop me a note on the other side if you'd prefer.

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 10:01:10 PM   
thickerdenwater


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Status: offline 		hmm well being deep is definately easy for me. I think I should write more in my journal on here. If I can figure it out, Ill add some depth to the profile itself. But I think Im gong to need to sit back and reflect on that before I post it up.

as for getting or holding on to a sub, its a bit of a problem with both. sometimes they come easy, and abruptly disappear (in which case I have no idea what happens) or they just overlook.

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RE: Need some critique - 2/25/2008 10:15:52 PM   
SubbieOnWheels


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Status: offline 		I am impressed with how well you articulate what you are looking for. It is a refreshing change from "Please be ready to serve me; I will tell and you will do." You are clearly looking for a woman with a head on her oulders; I like that, but it is a strange contrast with the "discarded" line.

PS - admit it - you just wanted a bunch of us to perve ya!

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