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Noah -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 4:25:17 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: christine1

thanks colouredin, sniffles....got any maple syrup on ya?

~~looks around the room...ok, i'm not only a waffleholic;  i'm a spicyporkrindstillmovingredmeatloverdarkbeerjeffffcarnivoreaholic~~~


Don't be too quick to presume nomination as president of the Stillmovingredmeatlovers Club. Not around here.

And by club I mean ...

you know what I mean..




colouredin -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 4:26:32 PM)

Wow Noah I gotta love your dedication, its impressive and not even a little bit sad :P




Noah -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 4:29:34 PM)

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ORIGINAL: colouredin

Wow Noah I gotta love your dedication, its impressive and not even a little bit sad :P


Whereas yours is starting to look kinda mopey.




colouredin -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 4:30:49 PM)

aww, darn it, ill try perking it up a bit from here on in :D




BitaTruble -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 4:34:47 PM)

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ORIGINAL: Noah


I'm sorry, Celeste, but "oft" is a hard limit I won't apologize for.



What?! I've spent two years stalking you and you pick now to tell me that 'oft' is a hard limit? And in public no less! That's it. I'm going to the revenge thread and plotting.

hrmph

Celeste




Noah -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 4:41:55 PM)

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ORIGINAL: BitaTruble

What?!

I've spent two years stalking you
and you pick now to tell me
that 'oft' is a hard limit?
And in public no less!
That's it. I'm going
to the revenge thread
and plotting.
hrmph


Would someone PLEASE unplug the Poem-a-Matic?




christine1 -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 4:43:44 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Noah

quote:

ORIGINAL: christine1

thanks colouredin, sniffles....got any maple syrup on ya?

~~looks around the room...ok, i'm not only a waffleholic;  i'm a spicyporkrindstillmovingredmeatloverdarkbeerjeffffcarnivoreaholic~~~


Don't be too quick to presume nomination as president of the Stillmovingredmeatlovers Club. Not around here.


And by club I mean ...

you know what I mean..


oh, make no mistake Noah....i am "QueenCarnivore"




domahpet -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 4:52:14 PM)

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ORIGINAL: Noah

quote:

ORIGINAL: domahpet

quote:

ORIGINAL: Aileen1968

I'm very sad.  My dam has never erupted like the mother load.


trust me, its pretty scary the first times it happens!


Come on you guys.

If Woody Allen and Yogi Bera had a bastard poetchild it would totally spout lines like that. And it would publish way more poetry than you.




who the fuck ever said i was trying (or wanting) to publish anything lyed to ya.
youve got a be the biggest jacket wearing, ambulance driving cheerleader ive EVER seen.
get over yourself already.
(im just sayin')




liketophoto -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 5:22:59 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Noah

quote:

ORIGINAL: liketophoto

There is no beauty in flight
when you are pecking away at road kill.


There is no beauty
When you are pecking away
At Autumn road kill

I'm the last one to stickle about line length (this one just flowed) but you really have to indicate a season if you want to call it haiku, liketophoto-san.

Thank you for showing us that pecking at road kill is not irredeemably estranged from beauty after all.


Thank you for changing my poem,
Please feel free to give contructive feedback, I always appriciate it.
I do not claim that my work is true haiku. I am not an essencialist.




Noah -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 5:31:31 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: domahpet
who the fuck ever said i was trying (or wanting) to publish anything lyed to ya.
youve got a be the biggest jacket wearing, ambulance driving cheerleader ive EVER seen.
get over yourself already.
(im just sayin')


Is my jacket that big?




domahpet -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 5:33:22 PM)

i can see it from here...

oh, and liketophoto?
your didy was perfect the way it was




liketophoto -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 5:34:25 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Noah

quote:

ORIGINAL: domahpet
who the fuck ever said i was trying (or wanting) to publish anything lyed to ya.
youve got a be the biggest jacket wearing, ambulance driving cheerleader ive EVER seen.
get over yourself already.
(im just sayin')


Is my jacket that big?



yes, just saying....




domahpet -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 5:42:07 PM)

say it photo, say it!!!!!!!!!![sm=banana.gif]




Level -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 5:44:07 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Noah

quote:

ORIGINAL: domahpet
who the fuck ever said i was trying (or wanting) to publish anything lyed to ya.
youve got a be the biggest jacket wearing, ambulance driving cheerleader ive EVER seen.
get over yourself already.
(im just sayin')


Is my jacket that big?



Evening, Noah. Hey, you know what they say about guys with big jackets..... [:D]




domahpet -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 5:55:28 PM)

well, at least I know who the real poet is around here..... ;)




Noah -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 6:01:55 PM)

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ORIGINAL: domahpet

well, at least I know who the real poet is around here..... ;)


Thank heavens. Finally someone who knows what he's talking about.
I guess I can go rustle up some dinner.  Much obliged.




Level -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 6:05:52 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: domahpet

well, at least I know who the real poet is around here..... ;)


Did I ever tell you about the time Charles Bukowski called me up for advice.....




SteelofUtah -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 6:18:35 PM)

Charles Bukowski = Hardcore Drinker and overuse of the word Fuck and variations of it. Overall I like his work ...A LOT

I am curious as to why my poem wasn't riddles to pieces like everyone elses.

Going to Bed take care people

As Always

Steel




liketophoto -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 6:30:24 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Noah

quote:

ORIGINAL: domahpet

well, at least I know who the real poet is around here..... ;)


Thank heavens. Finally someone who knows what he's talking about.
I guess I can go rustle up some dinner.  Much obliged.


You must have a large crow pie waiting for you.




Level -> RE: A Poem (3/2/2008 6:43:59 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: SteelofUtah

Charles Bukowski = Hardcore Drinker and overuse of the word Fuck and variations of it. Overall I like his work ...A LOT

I am curious as to why my poem wasn't riddles to pieces like everyone elses.

Going to Bed take care people

As Always

Steel


If Buk were still around, he'd chalk it all up to the mysteries of the universe..... sleep well.




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