TieMeInKnottss
Posts: 1944
Joined: 9/6/2012 Status: offline
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Well...you asked. First, I beg you...fix the grammar and spelling errors in your profile. I know people get irritated with the G&S Nazis like me but, frankly, you are trying to attract a partner. This initial presentation is your best foot forward (look at the animal kingdom...do you think the male peacocks think " I don't feel like wearing the nice feathers today. That pea hen will be overwhelmed by my masculine domination and will fall at my feet anyway, so why bother?) Second, real people shy away from negative profiles, high maintenance/demanding profiles and self-centered profiles..,yours hits all three ("too much heartbreak", "I will only answer people with pics in their profiles", "I want a slave. It must be a lifetime 24/7 but not at first").... No where in that profile have you mentioned what you like to do, who you are, what type of woman you want except slave & any age. Third, pics.. I love cats & dogs but half-naked man holding his kitty cat up to the camera....doesn't give off the "manly vibe" and, for God's sake, either put a top hat and trench coat on your dick or don't post a picture of it! Draining your bank account? I will be kind and assume that you meant you spent a lot of money on her not "I gave her my debit card and PIN to deposit a check & she never came back". I was MARRIED for 13 yrs & never gave my husband my PIN! I think that, like professional résumé writers, some of us should advertise in professional service section, to write effective profiles.
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