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How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 6:22:54 PM   
windyplayer


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Status: offline 		I got the following email in response to a quick note:
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to which I responded like this. Any reactions...
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You presume quite a lot for a slave.
After months of electronic supplication you might be rewarded with a visit to the esteemed master’s abode. And long distances would be no deterrent in your quest to serve and satisfy the master’s every need and whim. But as an unworthy slave, you must prove your worthiness and learn the skills of pleasing the master electronically before you can progress through the other many levels of training required before any actual person to person visit might be even considered.

First there is the email supplication where you, as slave, learn to please the master by following his every instruction to visit specially ordained websites and read the master’s stories and report your deepest feelings and fears in email as worship to the master. But there is also the trial of writing down your deepest fantasies for the entertainment of and derision by the master. And while you might seek to invent these fantasies, the master will know the lies in your heart and will know that you are only scratching the surface of your fears and fantasies. He will know that you demand electronic punishment for your deeds.

One of the later levels in this training is a long course of electronic discussion where you learn to behave when and if you might be honored with a visit to the master’s abode. You will learn how to dress, how to hold your unworthy body and how to speak and address his highness the master, lord of all that you hold dear.

After these many months of training and many false starts and failures, you might possibly be granted a visit to the master’s grand castle and such a visit might go like this recent one by an unworthy supplicant:

=======The Tale of Jen’s First Visit to the Master’s Castle ==========

A storm was expected along the coast this evening. The first powerful storm of the season, the wind was already whipping the pine trees above the masters house into a frenzy and the whistling and howling was beginning to build. It was not yet raining when the unworthy supplicant’s car arrived in the driveway.

Still sitting in the driver’s seat she opened the door and swung her legs out to change her shoes to the required high heel patent leather pumps required for the visit and pulled her trench coat tight about her. One could hardly drive 200 miles in those shoes. The patent leather outfit under her trench coat was chilling even tho she had the heater turned up full blast all the way on the long drive. It had taken most of the afternoon to drive from Northern Oregon to this lonely and desolate place along the Southern Coast. And clearly a storm was coming up. Isolated raindrops were spattering the windshield as she opened the door and walked the short distance to the front door. She was being very careful not to step off the stones and get any dirt or grass on her shoes. She knew it would go hard on her if she were not spotless on arrival.

Already shivering from the cold as the wind whipped the coat around her, she reached out and pushed the bell. She could barely hear it ring inside the door. Of course she would not push it again, no matter how long he kept her waiting in the cold. She knew that the master would be extremely impatient with her if she did that.

[More to come if you are worthy.]

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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 6:28:16 PM   
gooddogbenji


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Status: offline 		I would have a hard time deciding if you were joking or seriously full of shit.

I consider myself to have a decent command of the english language, but I still had to read a lot of it twice to figure out what you were saying.  Eventually, I gave up and decided my time was better wasted folding paper airplanes, and throwing them out of the windows that don't open.

Yours,


benji

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2nd installment - 7/24/2006 6:29:14 PM   
windyplayer


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The master heard the doorbell, but did not rise immediately. Of course he expected Jen and noted that she was right on time to the minute. But he sat quietly in his easy chair and waited as he anticipated the evenings activities. After four minutes, by the clock, he slowly rose and walked across the house to the front door. He unlocked the dead-bolt and after a few seconds pause, opened the door slowly and looked out at Jen. She was holding her head down. Feet close together and arms down at her side. She did not speak.

He said gruffly, "Supplicants use the rear entrance. "

He continued in an even tone: "You may proceed through the car port; through the door to the side yard. Close the door securely behind you. Proceed around the house to the rear to the slider on the patio. Take care not to get your shoes soiled. You may need to remove them.
"Present yourself at the rear for leave to enter."

She nodded with a slight bow; leaned down to remove her shoes and continued along the house on the walk toward the door. The carport was covered in corrugated plastic. The raindrops were popping onto the plastic.

The door was an improvised door made from 2 by 4s covered in a sheet of plywood. The latch was rusty and it required a strong tug to loosen the latch and then open the door. And after she had passed through it required a strong tug to shut the door and latch it.
She walked quickly around the house and onto the patio. The raindrops were falling faster now. Not enough to soak her, but her hair was getting wet and her trench coat was collecting drops.

She walked up to the patio slider with her eyes down. She stood quietly with her feet together holding her shoes at her side.
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RE:Benji can't figure it out... - 7/24/2006 6:32:42 PM   
windyplayer


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Status: offline 		Well, maybe someone else can figure it out...
I've got my rain coat on, so rain all you want on my parade...

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RE: RE:Benji can't figure it out... - 7/24/2006 6:35:04 PM   
gooddogbenji


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quote:

ORIGINAL: windyplayer

Well, maybe someone else can figure it out...
I've got my rain coat on, so rain all you want on my parade...

wp



It is, after all, what I do best.

But usually people wear boots, too.  I have a lot of pee in me.

Yours,


benji

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RE: 2nd installment - 7/24/2006 6:37:30 PM   
aleshaDreams


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Status: offline 		With no disrespect intended, this i would not take seriously at all for the very reason of Your profile and statement 'I'm not experienced in BSDM, but am willing to learn and will take it slow with safety and learning in mind.'  It can be as much of a fantasy as we each like it to be, but to be so blantly rigid with no experience i would have to respond 'nice fantasy'.  Thanks for sharing the story though.

[edit] to include the complete the truth behind what my reaction ......... 'i was not interested in reading the story after the initial response, but politely would have concluded with the 'Thanks for the share'.  And my reaction as such is because i have lived in the world of fantasy for along time, and many things will remain as fantasy but i am looking for 'real very real'  That was far to fictious just the initial response itself.


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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 6:51:29 PM   
dsalphabunny


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Status: offline 		at the risk of sounding overly forward i think the first email was well within bounds.  obviously You emailed first and the recipiant responded politely by pointing out that You are not what it is she is looking for.  this way no time is wasted on either side.  the email back?  i think that she had politely let You know she wasn't interested, it should have been dropped.

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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 7:02:13 PM   
cuddleheart50


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Status: offline 		It should have been dropped after her polite reply of no thanks.....as for your response...I have no idea what you were talking about.

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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 7:03:49 PM   
windyplayer


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quote:

ORIGINAL: dsalphabunny

at the risk of sounding overly forward i think the first email was well within bounds.  obviously You emailed first and the recipiant responded politely by pointing out that You are not what it is she is looking for.  this way no time is wasted on either side.  the email back?  i think that she had politely let You know she wasn't interested, it should have been dropped.

bunny



I thought we were all here for the head games and you seem to be playing this straight... This ain't match.com is it?....

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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 7:06:22 PM   
gooddogbenji


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quote:

ORIGINAL: windyplayer 

I thought we were all here for the head games and you seem to be playing this straight... This ain't match.com is it?....



You make my head hurt.

I know I'm not here for head games, and most people I know are not either.  And what does match.com have to do with the price of peas?

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benji

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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 7:19:05 PM   
jojoluvr


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Status: offline 		hmmmm, define "head games" -- as in, what do you mean by that?  my first response is, "no, of course we're not here to play head games" -- but i can think of interpretations of that phrase that would get a different answer...

and no, it's not match.com -- but that doesn't mean that people here aren't looking for their "one and only" -- among other things.  your profile indicates you recently signed on, so i'd say don't stress over the "thanks but no thanks" responses you get -- and, for your own sake, i wouldn't waste time on further communication with them either.  there are lots of members here -- most won't be a good match for you (which is true for all of us).  doesn't mean there aren't matches here for you though -- but finding them might take more than a week....

just my 2 cents -- for what it's worth...

and best of luck in your search!
jo

ps -- i would've (and did) quit reading your story after about the 3rd sentence, though -- esp if i'd already written a "thanks, but no thanks" response...




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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 7:30:06 PM   
juliaoceania


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quote:

ORIGINAL: windyplayer

quote:

ORIGINAL: dsalphabunny

at the risk of sounding overly forward i think the first email was well within bounds.  obviously You emailed first and the recipiant responded politely by pointing out that You are not what it is she is looking for.  this way no time is wasted on either side.  the email back?  i think that she had politely let You know she wasn't interested, it should have been dropped.

bunny




I thought we were all here for the head games and you seem to be playing this straight... This ain't match.com is it?....


Do you think that because you identify as a dominant that this somehow excludes you from rejection or headgames? (not that headgames are valid anywhere, even match.com)

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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 7:35:11 PM   
dsalphabunny


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quote:

ORIGINAL: windyplayer


I thought we were all here for the head games and you seem to be playing this straight... This ain't match.com is it?....


so what was it You wanted a response to?  how would i react to the email?  i probably would have deleted it unopened or else after the first sentance or so. 



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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 7:35:20 PM   
TNstepsout


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Status: offline 		I don't know what you were trying to acheive with that email, but if you sent it to me, what you WOULD have achieved was  convincing me you were a complete ass. If that's what you're going for then it's very well done. On the other hand.....


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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 7:35:53 PM   
catize


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You presume quite a lot for a slave 


Since this person is not YOUR slave, he/she is free to presume whatever they want.  Just because you call yourself a 'master' doesn't mean squat. 

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  After months of electronic supplication you might be rewarded with a visit to the esteemed master’s abode.


Playing hard to get for months?  Get real!

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 And long distances would be no deterrent in your quest to serve and satisfy the master’s every need and whim. 


You're paying all the travel expenses?  Kewl!

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   But as an unworthy slave,


What makes you a worthy master?

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   you must prove your worthiness and learn the skills of pleasing the master electronically before you can progress through the other many levels of training required before any actual person to person visit might be even considered.


Oh, goody!  I get to practice my cyber kneeling, I can do it for days!  And if I'm lucky, I'll get a cyber ass whuppin'........OW!

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  First there is the email supplication where you, as slave, learn to please the master by following his every instruction to visit specially ordained websites and read the master’s stories and report your deepest feelings and fears in email as worship to the master.


"Specially ordained"?  OMG, I think my deepest feelings would include uncontrollable laughter!  Guess that makes me unworthy, huh?

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  But there is also the trial of writing down your deepest fantasies for the entertainment of and derision by the master. 


I get it now, you're looking for wanking material!

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   And while you might seek to invent these fantasies, the master will know the lies in your heart and will know that you are only scratching the surface of your fears and fantasies.


Yep, calling yourself a master automatically means you can read minds without ever having met the person!  I always wanted a dominant with ESP!

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  He will know that you demand electronic punishment for your deeds.


Ow, OWIE, OH that hurts! 

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  You will learn how to dress, how to hold your unworthy body and how to speak and address his highness the master, lord of all that you hold dear.


And we haven't even met yet! Just  imagine what an unworthy puddle I'd be in your presence!

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[More to come if you are worthy.]  
 

I doubt it, I'm laughing so hard my eyes are squinty and can't see the words! 

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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 7:39:34 PM   
maybemaybenot


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Status: offline 		I'm thinking I am not worthy of answering the question. Ya Know, being a submissive and all.

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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 7:40:25 PM   
cheshireboy


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Status: offline 		i always found head games to be most enjoyable...esp if they are done well and all that jazz, but if after the first reply, she isn't interested, i'm not going to waste my talent on trying to lure her back in with a story or so, no matter how good i write.  much rather give a story when demanded, or requested.....
 
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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 7:45:47 PM   
shigglyboom


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Status: offline 		Windy -

I would be appalled. Just because we're subs doesn't mean we want to be patronized by strangers. I mean, maybe that's a few people's kink.... but you'd lose me entirely by being such a bully upon introduction, even if you were next door.

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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 7:45:51 PM   
APhacetoSit


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Status: offline 		Personally, i would have read your response for amusement, and after the first sentence would have closed it, and erased it, thinking Kazhdij Grochit' kak on khochit'.  pardon the poor transliteration.  this is Russian for Different Strokes for Different Folks, or, literally, everybody masturbates in their own way.
     By the way, i agree with Lxxxxxx, Good Luck in your search adding enjoy your fantasy.

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RE: How would you react to this??? - 7/24/2006 7:45:58 PM   
stanton


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