empassive
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ORIGINAL: dewillac Nah, too traditional. Here's how: She’s a writer (wow, what a surprise)! She writes romances under one name and mysteries under another. One of her mystery novels involved the mob. She did her research and actually got very close to a mob boss and his “boys”. When she wrote her book, she had them proof it for her and made corrections based on their edits. Now they handle her money for her and they’re always available when she needs them. When her hubby’s plan is found out, naturally in time for her to attend the all-important meeting, she contacts her mob friends. She explains what happened when she was “sold” and how the Master helped her figure out what was going on. She arranges to attend the meeting, held at the mob’s location, and surprises hubby. She demands a divorce, which he grants. But then she offers him a choice. He can either spend three weeks (the same amount of time she was with the Master) with the mob boys doing anything they want to him, with two restrictions - he cannot be killed outright by them nor can he die from anything they do him. OR, he can let her sell him to her friend, Callie, who will let him go after three weeks if he manages to satisfy her needs. Of course, he won’t know she’s a Mistress, who has the right to sell him to someone else prior to the three week time period. Bottom line is that he can either choose to be beaten up 24/7 for three weeks or he can have sex with Callie with three weeks. Be careful what you wish for!!!!!! This is why I wanted to know if a sub (slave?) can be sold. For a get-back, what do you think? Will this work? FWIW, I think it's a great plot and I would definitely read that book. In fact, I was a little disappointed to see you'd posted the ending as I wanted to be surprised if I ever ran across it. I'm a voracious reader, if it counts for anything. And a writer. And I believe I know how stories "work." Yours works. At least for me. :) I think a mainstream readership will find it titillating if you don't get too explicit with the bdsm torture scenes, although you could go a little heavier with the hubby as he is the bad guy and people will see it as his just rewards.
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